The animation was poor and lacked any real storyline
try writing the animation first, and spending more time animating it, hopefully you'll produce better flashes.
as for this one the quality was extremely poor.
The Penicorn Collab!
Posted by TheDeathReaperIsBack Feb. 20, 2009 @ 4:35 PM EST
I'm Hosting a Penicorn Collab!
I got the idea when looking in the NG store and found the penicorn plush toy, upon that looking at stampers thread thought it would be a neat idea to have a bunch of people animate the penicorn!
Heres the thread-Penicorn Collab
I thought the animation was ok, but it was just a movie clip being played back and forth with random sounds..
Things you can improve on are length, you could include some storyline to the animation and maybe some jokes or something..
Overall i thought it was poor.
Very Well Done
I thought the animation was good,and the way that the flash was made look like the movie by tom. A little disturbing but funny none the less.
9/10, good job :D
It was really odd, it actually scared me alot...
overall, the animation was brilliant, the concept was brilliant, and it scared the hell out of me really...
Don't copy blockhead...
The-Swain made blockhead and he should keep it.. your giving it a bad name...
And it wasn't a good flash either.
So just make your flashes original and improve on it.
Unless you made a spoof of blockhead but.. still.
did you pass english at school???
Genre: Comedy - Parody
Pretty god damn cool...........
i wish i could animate like that... it's just brilliant, i love the zombie ones there so cool!
No sleep we'll be here WATCHING YOU. ROFL good animation and storline. hehe
i got it to 4.50:P lol..
ill rape a gun in his honour..
i'll ERECT a gun in his honour..sorry, my bad..the sound is too quiet....
a dazzling display of enigeneering genius
it was compelling and that of a true ariteeest........10/10 100/100 65645/65645 1/1 54/54 67.78/67.78 KAPOW!
Yesssss...sure....cos youre sane *cough*
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