The animation was poor and lacked any real storyline
try writing the animation first, and spending more time animating it, hopefully you'll produce better flashes.
as for this one the quality was extremely poor.
The Penicorn Collab!
Posted by TheDeathReaperIsBack Feb. 20, 2009 @ 4:35 PM EST
I'm Hosting a Penicorn Collab!
I got the idea when looking in the NG store and found the penicorn plush toy, upon that looking at stampers thread thought it would be a neat idea to have a bunch of people animate the penicorn!
Heres the thread-Penicorn Collab
I thought the animation was ok, but it was just a movie clip being played back and forth with random sounds..
Things you can improve on are length, you could include some storyline to the animation and maybe some jokes or something..
Overall i thought it was poor.
Very Well Done
I thought the animation was good,and the way that the flash was made look like the movie by tom. A little disturbing but funny none the less.
9/10, good job :D
The graphics wern't great but i found the concept and gameplay a good simple idea, kept me playing it for ages
I found the concept good, and simple, hurt's though..
Where's the nudity in it lol XD
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